Very, very good. Best one I've seen so far in fact! I do have to say that The Captain's voice could've used a little more...conviction, but the self-deprecating humor ("f*ck you that's what happened to my voice") mitigates the damage in my book. Graphics were clean and effective and the dialogue worked in relation to what you were trying to accomplish. Excellent work, man. I hope this one places in the contest :D