Good Job
That was defintely longer than I thought it would be, but you explained a lot, which is a good thing. The first episode in a series is usually less intense than the others, so I'm hoping there will be more action in the sequel. The storyline is pretty decent, and I don't have many complaints. There were a couple spelling/grammatical errors, such as the use of "are" instead of "is". It's alright though, two is a negligible number for a seven plus minute flash. The humor was unexpected. You kept the storyline quite serious, and then all of I sudden I'm reading, "There were stairs, you dumbshit!" I couldn't help but smile. However, I thought 8-bit Link cussed too much, although when I think about it, I'd probably be cursing too if two dudes came out of nowhere, hog tied me, and proceeded to drag me along the rocky earth. One last thing - the text bar. You kept on making it pop up, then slide back down. Just let it pop up, then when the scene is over with, slide it back down. Overall, good work, and good luck making part two!
3.35/5.00, B-, 80/100