Score: 5

"Pretty Average"

submission: Brothers In Arms pt. 2

date: November 30, 2005

Well, first off, I want to commend you guys for working on flash at such a young age. Most 13 year olds could only dream of making something like this. As for the flash, it wasn't bad. The animation was a bit choppy, and the graphics were rather simple, but clean enough. The major problem I saw was how the violence was animated. Getting stabbed by a knife would produce a much larger bloody mess. You should have animated a spurt of blood as he got stabbed, and put a little bit more blood afterwards. Also, try animating the stabbing motion a bit faster. It seemed like your character was just poking his enemies with the knife instead of jabbing it into them. Pretty good stuff nonetheless. You dudes have potential.

Score: 5

"Just not as good."

submission: All NG Fads Die!!! 4.2!!!

date: November 29, 2005

I hate to say it, but this was no where near as good as the other AFDs. For once, the music began to piss me off about a minute into the film. The artists, plain and simple, were not as talented as the ones in AFD4, so it kind of makes this seem like the "B Team" of the group. There wasn't as much violence as there could have been, and there was a little too much tweening going on for my taste. Still, it wasn't bad. The AFD spirit was definitely still in there, regardless of skill level. Better luck next time guys.

Score: 3

"Cruel"

submission: [ muffins ]

date: November 29, 2005

From the beginning, for some reason, I could sense an unexpected twist coming my way, but that was just low man. I can see that you were trying to utilize 'shock value' to increase the humor, but honestly, you would've been much better off either making the movie sane, or using a totally different type of humor. It's never a good idea to attack a race. It's one thing to make a jew joke, but when it's as blatant as throwing a jewish symbol (in this case the muffin) into flames with stawstikas being bradished about, you're taking it about five steps too far. I'm not jewish myself, but to me, this was obviously offensive.

However, there is potential in you. If you cleaned up your humor, I'm sure you'd have greater success on you next movie. Good luck in the future.

Score: 9

"Thank God"

submission: Skittlez N' Shitz

date: November 28, 2005

I knew it was just a matter of time before something like this would pop up. Great job with all the excessive farts and what not. The voice acting was brilliant in general, although there were a couple of spots that were just too crazy to understand (but I understand it was partially intentional). Anyway, great job. I'm sure this one will stir up some controversy, but you definitely have my 5. :D

Score: 7

"Wow! Much better guys"

submission: James Bond Control

date: November 22, 2005

At first I thought this was going to be a cheesy, half assed series, but these things just keep getting better and better with each film. Great use of that Control remix music - I really liked it (I was just playing some 007 earlier this day :D). As the last reviewer said, the gunshots and reactions are getting pretty realistic, although an MP5 would usually be fired in spurts, not single shots (didn't bother me though). I thought it was great how the "Picked up a PP7 silenced." would pop up on the bottom of the screen also, just like the game itself. The best part for me though, was the quality of the camera - it was excellent without much distortion at all. Great job. I'm looking forward to the next installment :D

Score: 7

"Hahaha Awesome"

submission: Insult Generator V1

date: November 18, 2005

Man, I never really thought of calling someone a "Urine Gulping Sphincter", but I guess I gotta start somewhere. Great game man, very creative. 4/5

Score: 4

"I expected better ..."

submission: Dudeology 1

date: November 15, 2005

Come on man. I'm not a huge fan of your other stuff, but I definitely enjoyed most of it. This however, was just plain annoying because of that squeaky, high pitched voice acting. I also think there should have been more questions, at least ten or so more. Better luck next time dude.

Score: 5

"Not bad, not bad at all."

submission: Ricks Shorts 1

date: November 10, 2005

This was pretty good dude. I can tell you're new at flash, and this was a pretty decent attempt. Making the sticks talk was a great idea - it keep people more interested. I just didn't like the whole " gay queer thing". I've made some movies where I put gay jokes in the dialogue, and let me tell you something : it's really not worth it. You're bound to get a bad review saying how you insulted gays, which in a sense you did. Personally, I know you were joking and stuff, but it might offend others and could therefore lower your score. So just for future references, stay away from gay jokes. The animation was average, and there wasn't much wrong with the sound. Good job overall man, and stick with it :D

Score: 9

"Wow, that was quick!"

submission: (2005)In 3 Minutes

date: November 10, 2005

Knox! You're great man. "Throw that by me again, hotshot!" That was the coolest line I've heard in a while. At first I didn't think this would be up to par with your other submissions because of how rapidly you made it, but you have proven me wrong. Great job man, and keep it up :D

Score: 9

"This Screams Cool."

submission: Alternate Doom: Prologue

date: November 6, 2005

I was skimming through the portal and I saw a movie with "doom" in the title. I'm thinkin to myself, "no way wilson submitted this already". I saw "OrangeOwnage" as the author and I nearly gasmed. Alright man, there's a lot of stuff I want to say, so here it goes. Awesome new speaking lines man. Much more fluent and presentable. The audio change was perfect - using a mellow, more sad genre of music clued me that although this was pretty bloody, there would be much more to come. Speaking of blood, that was one of the best first person shoot outs I have ever seen, especially for sprites. The drawn hand and shotgun moved extremely realisticly, and the whole fight was gorey and quick. It really was very exciting man. Then, you led us to the shores of hell, which was a great idea for the plot - as you could go nearly anywhere from there. Overall, I can tell this will be a great, rememerable series with tons of violence, emotion, and kickassness. Great job man, and congrats :D